Author Topic: Congrats Adam Dunn!  (Read 3417 times)

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Offline MarquisDeSade

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Re: Congrats Adam Dunn!
« Reply #25: May 14, 2012, 10:51:41 AM »
You need an editor.  You ramble too much.  Very painful to read.  That, my friend, is the source of the irritation. Anything relevant you had to say could have been expressed in three to four well structured sentences. 

This sums it up perfectly.