Ill take a try, by posting the players I vote each time on the ballot, as for pitchers ill probaly leave most the way you have them.
A.L
1B - T. Hafner
2B - B. Upton
3B - A. Rodriguez
SS - C. Guillen
OF - Ichiro
OF - V. Guerrero
OF - M. Ordonez
C - V. Martinez
Bench
G. Sheffeild
N. Swisher
D. Ortiz
J. Posada
B. Roberts
P. Polanco
K.Youkilis
O. Cabrera
J. Morneau
T. Hunter
D. Jeter
A. Rios
M. Lowell
SP
C. Sabathia
J. Beckett
J. Verlander
D. Haren
J. Santana
G. Meche
J. Lackey
RP/CL
F. Rodriguez
J. Papelbon
B. Jenks
J. Putz
N.L
1B - P. Fielder
2B - C.Utley
3B - D.Wright
SS - J. Hardy
OF - M. Holliday
OF - K. Griffey Jr.
OF - B. Bonds
C - R. Martin
Bench
H.Ramirez
M. Cabrera
D. Young
A.Jones
J. Reyes
J. Bay
T. Helton
B.Philliphs
A. Soriano
D. Lee
A.Pujouls
C. Lee
J.Rollins
SP
C. Hamels
J. Peavy
B. Penny
J. Smoltz
C. Young
B. Sheets
R. Hill
RP/CL
F. Cordero
T.Saito
J. Valverde
T. Hoffman